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Dance of the Light

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another painting I did for my mum; Watercolours
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Very well done. It's very easy to tell what this is, and it's beautiful. All though, the picture looks a bit....how should I put it......streaky. Next time, slow down your brush strokes, or use circular motion to get a smoother effect. The flower is done perfectly, especially the tips, it's really only anything that's green that's a bit streaky. Also, I'm having a little bit of a hard time figuring out where the light source is.I'm thinking it's to the left of the flower, but It kind of looks like it's to the right of the flower as well. All in all. Amazing design, simple yet brilliant colors, but a bit too streaky.